First off loved the dough joke.
You did write in on of my least favorite things though: scripts that reference about other movies. So... Self satisfying to the writers, but almost never plays well.
Your color grade looks a bit flat. Did you shoot raw or prores? In either case you need to pull out the contrast some more and work with the colors to get them to pop. Using a LUT like captain hooks is a great starting point.
Nice job otherwise.